1. What do you think is the strongest part of
the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design,
the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so
strong?
I think the strongest bit of there blog is the picture he has used because it represents the life the character he is, life and what has happened to them. He has added of the Genocide which is good because it shows one of the main themes of the play and it shows what his character has gone through, which suggest he has well researched his character. This is what makes his performance much, much stronger.
2. Is there a part of the blog you find
confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest or the character
for which it was designed? A link for which you don’t understand the
connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?
He has a link on the Genocide however, he does not say this is the troubles and pains i went through or something like that he just has a random link at the top of his Character blog which is quite confusing. To improve he needs to say what the links about because if he does not it will be just confusing.
3. After reading the blog, what would you like
to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down
at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.
I would like to know how he feels about the genocide and how he lived without no mother or father. Also with the interahamwe coming where did he hind, how did he survived and know he got contact with joseph and alex.
4.
Did you notice any major misspellings or
grammatical issues? Please note down anything.
no i did not
5. Did your partner fulfil all the requirements
on the Character Blog Requirements handout?
yes he did for most, he blog suggest that he looked at sirs blog and that he look and what he had to do for everything and explained it.
If not, which one or ones still need to be added?
http://simonwitness.blogspot.co.uk/
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